भन्थेँ आफ्नो भन्नु यही मन छ केवल
आफन्तका मेलामा एक्लिदा
सगर्व।

आरण्य सपनाको थियो, त्यतै कतै बन्दी मेरो मन
ब्यग्र म थिएँ आखेटमा,
सशस्त्र।

कस्तुरी बासना बढेझैँ छ झन
स्वतन्त्र मेरो मन, म आकुल बन्दी मृगतृष्णामा
निशस्त्र।

प्रलय-प्रणयमा सपना र मेरो मन-बिद्रोही
घाईते दर्शकमा एकल म
परस्त॥

Khai AIIMS ma padhya koi chhaina yaha? states ma dherai chha bhanthe re ta!

yo ta Bikas sir ko taal paryo 'n ta huh?

Nice, Deep bro.

Gotta love your poetic skills.

db

Like the morning dews-
About to dissipate
I am with anguish ?
For I was there since the evening
All night thru unrecognized-
Right before the death
Immortal I felt with doubt
Sustained doubt.

Poetic skill tikharam bhanya khai ke taal mildaina mildaina--

sajha is infested with high power poets--- inspiration ko ta kami chhaina ni---tara ni khai ke ke ----kalankibro ko sangat le garda hola khattam bhaiyo...

Sanskrit or Nepali Deep?

U sure are rich on words, dude. Really deep one this time.
Any new stories?

Deep Bro,

थ्रिडको टाटल पनि नेपलीमै छान्या भए मैले हिजै हेर्ने थिएँ।

गहिराइ छ कवितामा तिम्रो नाम जस्तै ।
शब्दार्थ पनि उल्लेख गर्नु पर्ला जस्तो छ यसपालि त।

आरण्य : ?
प्रणय' ?

>kalankibro ko sangat le garda hola khattam bhaiyo...
बिचरा कलकंलाई दोष दिएर ।

DWI,
>Sanskrit or Nepali Deep?
LOL!


मेरो एउटा लेख पनि हेरम्। कमेन्ट भए गरम्।
कमेन्ट हरेसी अर्को लेख्नु पर्ला।
http://www.nepaljapan.com/Bichar-Bisleshan/MAY2004/24th-Ashis.htm

dada giri,
lekh padhera lekhchhu hai kasto lagyo--

deep ji,

yahan le bhanna khojeko chahi tyati bujhiyena, bhannale kabita ko artha/marma chahi maile bujhina.. aba afno baklo khopadi ma sahitya tyati ghusdaina, feri sahitya padhne abhyas pani tyati bhayena, bharkhar tyo bachha haroo ko lagi lekheko Tom Sawyer padhera sakaye. aba k yaha lai dikka paru yo anap sanap bakwaas le, yahan ko kabita ko marma nabujhe pani yaha ko sabda chayan ramro lagyo.

DadaGiri is like another Rastafariya! it's funny!
Deep I am impressed with your poem/Gazal whatever is it!

भन्थेँ आफ्नो भन्नु यही मन छ केवल
आफन्तका मेलामा एक्लिदा
सगर्व।

Been there couple of times. keep on!

Bramha

Deep,
>lekh padhera lekhchhu hai kasto lagyo--
Ok waiting!


Bhramha,
>DadaGiri is like another Rastafariya! it's funny!
कुन अर्थमा भन्न खोज्नुभएको हो ब्रम्हाजीले कुन्नि!
Rastafariya must be one of the nicknames in Sajha, right? Just guess. Tara hijoaja dekhinna ta.

Isolated Feak bro,
>baklo khopadi
LOL

दिप ब्रोबाट प्रतिकृया माथिका प्रतिकृयाहरु पर्खिंदा झर्को नालागोस् भनेर मेले मेरो ओमियागे भाग २ को लिन्क पनि टाँस्ने जमर्को गर्दा अत्युक्ती नहोला कि। यसलाई हेरेर समय पास गर्दा कसो होला।
सेउसी छ यो चाहीँ।
http://my.hknepal.com/content.php?article.105

नोट:
No Masterbation in Sajha!

aba baklo khopadi lai baklo khopadi nai bhannu paryo, sahitya ma tyatti dakhal chaina bro. Katha, kabita, muktak, ghazal, khanda kabya aadi yityadi bata ma tadhai rahanchu. Aaba jati choti padhda ni nabujhe pachi k garne? Tapaiko choto katha ki atma-britanta pani padhe. Tyo chahi sajilai sanga bujhiyo, tara tyasko sirshak Omiyage bhaneko bujhiyena. Ani yo nepali ma type kasari garne?

धन्यबाद ब्रो! सप्पै पढेकोमा!
>Tyo chahi sajilai sanga bujhiyo, tara tyasko sirshak Omiyage bhaneko bujhiyena.

कथा पढिसकेपछि, झण्डै झण्डै अर्थ पुस्टिन्छ होला भनेर जापानी शब्द घुसाइदिएको नि। ओमियागे जापानी शब्द हो । नेपालीमा @उपहार@
अंग्रेजीमा ?
अब ईन्द्रको अगाडि मैले स्वर्गको वयान गर्ने कुचेस्टा नगरम् हैन त?

॥Ani yo nepali ma type kasari garne?
नेपालीमा टाइप गर्न सिक्नलाई यो लिन्क हेरम्। पहिला नेपाली रोमनाइज्ड युनिकोड इन्स्टल गर्ने । अनि धमाधम् टाइप गर्ने!
http://www.mpp.org.np
http://www.mpp.org.np/detail_guide/images/new_layout.JPG

DWI and others-
yo herna bhyako ho?

-http://www.sajha.com/sajha/html/openthread.cfm?forum=2&threadID=18257

Dada giri and others,
I will come back with comments later---hai--ke garne ahile ali byastata le pelan di ra chha ke---

DadaGiri,

Rastafariya is another Sajha member and he has unique style of writing in english...and I like that! You have another unique style here in typical nepali bhasa and i like it too. Take it as an appreciation.

Wondering why u chose the title DadaGiri though?

Bramha

dadaGiri,
Omiyage padhe...bro tyastari makiko kalilo man ma aaghat puryaidiyera ajha kimkartabyabimudh bhako rey? ram ram ram---

saral prastuti lagyo---mero afno raya dinu parda ke bhanau hola bhane katha bastu ra patraharu satahi hisable badheka bhaye pani sukshma ra gahiro asar antya ma prabhavhin thiyo bhanda satyokti nahola.

*****
Jhan urmila ra sarmilako omiyage ta ajha ugra rahechha gathe!

sambedansil bisayabastuma aadharit prastuti bhaye bhane adhes bhane rasik bhavma lageko paye---

aba ke thik ke bethik tyo ta byaktigat ra samajik paridhi ra ti paridhima nihit mulya ebam manyata pratiko dristikonma aljhine kura ho---

ramro lagyo---
baru urmilaki bahini chai ko ta bya bhai sakya chhaina ki? euta jhino aash ni afno pani--

Bramha,
Brahmalok ko exit miss bhayera sajhalok tira aai pugya ta haina ta?

mero ke sochai chha bhane manchhe eklo bhanekai bhidma hunchha---parayako bhidma eklo pareko ma ta ke dukha bho ra--jab afantaika bhid ma eklo parchha manchhe taba defend garne afnai man hunchha tara man bhane tyasto defense ko parbaha gardaina.
ke garne yastai chha---

IF bro, sahitya bhanya pani tyai naranchaur jastai hola prabho---afno anubhav wa sochai pratibimbhit hunchha bhane afnai lagchha nabhaye parai---

That corner was the center
I belonged there once-
So I thought-
I came back to my corner, again
But where is it?
They say I changed
I say the corner did.
Confusion still exists
But the Corner is lost.

Thanks Deep Bro!

उर्मिलाको बिहे भ छैन । हिजोसम्मको कुरा हो। आज बिहान भा भे त भगवान जानून्।
मेले ब्रोबाट यसो ळेख्नि तरिका सिक्नु छ।

कस्तो कस्तो फुर्ने हो ब्रोलाई।

अनि त्यो कर्नर छोटो मीठो, गहिरो ! शाँधेको गुन्द्रुकको याद आयो मलाई त।

Bramha,
>Wondering why u chose the title DadaGiri though?
पछि भनम्ला नि सुटुक्क । यसको पनि आफ्नै कथा आफ्नै ब्यथा छ।

वल्ला गाँऊमा त ल रात पर्यो, म सुतैँ है त!
शूभरात्री!

dadagiri bro,
sadheko gundruk sundruk ko latte diyera malai gahat ko jhol bhidai dini?

maile ta Bimalako kura garya ni prabho, Urmila ki baini. Raat bhar sarkaileu khatiya jada lage gardini Urmila sanga, bihan bhaye si malai Urmilako bya bha chhaina laijau bhandini?
bhayena ni----prabho!

>sarkaileu khatiya jada lage

माथिको उर्दु बुझिन यार मेले फन्ट नमिल्या हो कि?